Great story, Reena. The ending made me sad. A move-out requires a lot of courage and the protagonist might have been sad for a long time, thinking and playing out the moment of moving out in her mind. And yes, no bond is stronger than the one with a childhood friend, even if they are not related to you.
Love the concept and how you got a story within a story. Cheers Reena!
Great story. I love that Sunil remembered the mangoes after 20 years. True story by any chance?
This gave me a smile - a mixed one :)) What a sweet story of a sweet bond
Terrific turn at the end of the poem.
Great story, Reena. The ending made me sad. A move-out requires a lot of courage and the protagonist might have been sad for a long time, thinking and playing out the moment of moving out in her mind. And yes, no bond is stronger than the one with a childhood friend, even if they are not related to you.
Yes!
That ending! Thank you, Reena!
Yes! great ending to this.
Oh, what a lovely story. You are really making these 100 words count. And that last sentence...