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Oh. That last line is so unexpected... So poignant.

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Oct 21, 2023Liked by Reena Kapoor

So much said in so little words. Lovely Reena.

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So powerful in what, a hundred words? Wow.

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You are my favorite Friday post!

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You really need to find a place that publishes micro fiction and submit. I think this one is a true winner that is likely to get published.

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Oh my God, Reena, that last line. Wow.

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Enjoying your 100-word stories. Each one is unique and hits home. Been reading them for awhile and thought of dropping in to say Hi today. Keep them coming! And good luck!

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Oct 20, 2023Liked by Reena Kapoor

Put across so perfectly...Reena you write so well ❤️❤️👌👌

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This is written so well. It went right through me.

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